Model WIP will support meele

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Bananasalat
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Model WIP will support meele

Post by Bananasalat »

Hi guys
I hope iam in the right forum here. (If not move the thread)

This will be a model for UT2004.
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Hope you like it

and crits are welcome
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Post by TKATK »

what with the hair

then you make realistic models,then you make anime,decide
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Post by Shuri »

I like it so far, but think it could do with some work.

* The asymmetry between armour on arms is good, but the trousers look a bit stupid.

* The guy seems a bit too thin?

* Fingers seem to be too thick at the ends - fingers should get thinner torward the end, not just go chubby ;)

* Shoes seem kinda dull, think they could be improved.

* Ditto for hair, nice idea but doesn't look great atm - but if it gets a good texture it could look fine.

Overall I think it's very good! :) And ignore comments as you wish, I don't know much about player modeling.
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Post by Bananasalat »

glad you like it an thanks for the crits.
*starting to fix the fingers*
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Post by Bananasalat »

here is an closeup of the head ( i dont like it )

do you have some ideas to make it look better

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BTW: and i know the hair is not very good
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Post by Shuri »

Thoughts on the head:

* Ears should be more 'connected' to the face.

* Should be a clearer division between forehead and hair?

* Eye 'spaces' should be deeper in the face I think, and cheeks emphasised slightly more.

* Same with chin, and he might need a bit more of a neck.

* Nose needs to connect to the face below it better, it just stops atm.
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Post by BIGFOOT_PI »

Good points, I just wish I could character model AT ALL! :)
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Post by neolith »

I'd like to see some flat shaded or wireframe renders - it's easier to read the model's geometry.
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Post by Armagon »

That's meant to be Cloud Strife from Final Fantasy VII right? If so, it looks good so far. Something about the hair doesn't seem quite right though. :?

Maybe you could make the hair a bit more like it is in this pic?
http://armagon.w00ties.com/Pics/FFVII/C ... piroth.jpg
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Post by Bananasalat »

no it shoudnt be cloud :P
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