After a long while, I finally made my first none tutorial map. FizzyB has informed me that it's "****" and told me that it's best for me to never map again for the sake of us all .
But I hope that the rest of our opinions will be different.
I introduce to you.....
DM/Duel-Crater screenies and stuff on teh following link.
I would say that from what i can see in the pic it needs to be fleshed out more. Throw some statics in there, add some pipe work. Maybe something for the celing too.
You could also change the lighting in some parts to add contrast and variety. Maybe somewhere a lamp is broken so that less light emits from that position?
–The biggest trick the devil ever pulled, was convincing the world he didn't exist.–
looking quite good, & alot more detail then you find in most of my maps Gamyplay might be a bit basic for dm, but its looks like a winner as far as duel is concerned
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